[TOEFL writing] May 8, 2024 (2)

This is a controversial topic, but I think that targeted advertising isn't an ethical problem and I'm not concerned about it.

 

I really like Mike's idea that we can just opt-out of targeted advertising if we are worried about it. I'd add that it is extremely easy to do this nowadays, as Internet browsers are very user-friendly.

I really like Mike's idea that we can just opt-out of targeted advertising if we are worried about it.

 

I'd add that it is extremely easy to do this nowadays, as Internet browsers are very user-friendly.

 

Even people that are inexperienced with technology can find the right settings and adjust them.

Even people that are inexperienced with technology can find the right settings and adjust them.

Even people that are inexperienced with technology can find the right settings and adjust them.

 

Jessica raised the relevant point that companies should create advertisements that appeal to a broad audience, but she didn't mention how difficult it is to make advertisements like that.

Jessica raised the relevant point that companies should create advertisements that appeal to a broad audience,  but she didn't mention how difficult it is to make advertisements like that.

Jessica raised the relevant point that companies should create advertisements that appeal to a broad audience, but she didn't mention how difficult it is to make advertisements like that.

 

Society is more diverse than ever before, so it is almost impossible to create messages that everyone finds attractive.

Society is more diverse than ever before, so it is almost impossible to create messages that everyone finds atrractive.

Society is more diverse than ever before, so it is almost impossible to create messages that everyone finds attractive.

Society is more diverse than ever before, so it is almost impossible to create messages that everyone finds attractive.

 

Small companies without large  advertising and research budgets might go out of business if they are prevented from using cheap and effective targeted advertising.

Smal companies without large advertising and research budgets might go out of business if they are prevented from using cheap and effective targeted advertising.

Small companies without large advertising and research budgets might go out of business if they are prevented from using cheap and effective targeted advertising.