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[TOEFL writing] Jun. 8, 2024

Sungyeon Kim 2024. 6. 8. 11:14

The reading passage and lecture both discuss the impact of remote work on business, but they emphasize different aspects of its effects.

The reading passage and lecture both discuss the impact of remote work on business, but they emphasize different aspects of its effects.

both discuss

both discuss

both discuss

the impact of remote work

the impact of remote work

the impact of remote work

on business

emphasize different aspects

emphasize different aspects

emphasize different aspects

emphasize different aspects 

 

The reading passage highlights the advantages of remote work, such as increased flexibility and reduced commute time for employees, as well as cost savings on office space and utilities for businesses.

highlights the advantages

increased flexibility

reduced commute time

cost savings on office space and utilities

 

These points illustrate how remote work can enhance the work-life balance of employees and reduce overhead costs for employers.

These points illustrate

These points illustrate

how remote work can enhance

how remote work can enhance

the work-life balance of 

the work-life balance of

reduce overhead costs for

reduce overhead costs for 

 

In contrast, the lecture focuses on the drawbacks of remote work.

In contrast,

In contrast,

focuses on

focuses on

the drawbacks of

 

The professor points out that communication can suffer when employees are not co-located, leading to misunderstandings and project delays.

points out that

points out that

points out that

communication can suffer 

communication can suffer

communication can suffer

when employees are not co-located

when employees are not co-located

when employees are not co-located

leading to misunderstandings and project delays

project delays

project delays

 

Additionally, some employees may find it challenging to maintain productivity without the structure provided by a traditional office setting, which can result in decreased efficiency.

some employees may find it challenging to

some employees may find it challenging to

some employees may find it challenging to

some employees may find it challenging to

maintain productivity without

maintain productivity

maintain productivity

without the structure provided by a traditional office setting, which can result in decreased efficiency

which can result in 

which can result in

 

Moreover, the lecture addresses the social aspect, noting that the lack of in-person interaction can lead to feelings of isolation and negatively impact mental health.

the lecture addresses the social aspect

the lecture addresses the social aspect

the lecture addresses the social aspect

noting that the lack of in-person interaction can lead to

the lack of in-person interaction can lead to

the lack of in-person interaction can lead to

the lack of in-person interaction can lead to 

feelings of isolation

feelings of isolation

feelings of isolation

negatively impact mental health

negatively impact mental health

negatively impact mental health.

 

This highlights a significant downside of remote work that businesses need to consider when evaluating its feasibility.

This highlights a significant downside of remote work

a significant downside

a significant downside

businesses need to consider when evaluating its feasibility

need to consider

need to consider

need to consider

when evaluating

when evaluating

when evaluating

its feasibility

feasibility

 

In conclusion, while the reading passage presents the benefits of remote work, the lecture underscores its potential drawbacks.

the reading passage presents the benefits of

the reading passage presents the benefits of

underscores its potential drawbacks

underscores its potential drawbacks

 

Both perspectives are crucial for businesses to consider when deciding whether to implement remote work policies.

Both perspectives are crucial for businesses to consider when deciding whether to implement remote work policies.

are crucial for businesses to consider

are crucial for businesses to consider

are crucial for businesses to consider

are crucial for businesses to consider

when deciding 

when deciding

when deciding

whether to implement remote work policies

whether to implement

whether to implement

whether to implement

implement remote work policies

implement remote work policies

implement remote work policies