English Transcription

[TOEFL writing] Jun. 15, 2024

Sungyeon Kim 2024. 6. 15. 10:17

The reading passage explains the advantages of bike-sharing programs, while the listening passage highlights several practical issues that undermine these benefits.

 

Firstly, the reading asserts that bike-sharing programs can decrease the number of cars on the road, thus reducing emissions and promoting a healthier lifestyle.

Firstly, the reading asserts

the reading asserts

the number of cars on the road

thus reducing emissions and promoting a healthier lifestyle

healthier lifestyle

healthier lifestyle

 

However, the professor contends that theft and vandalism pose significant challenges.

contends that

contends that

theft and vandalism

theft and vandalism

theft and vandalism

pose significant challenges

pose significant challenges

 

He notes that many cities experience high rates of stolen and damaged bikes, which leads to financial losses and discourages potential users.

notes that

notes that

many cities experience high rates of stolen and damaged bikes

high rates of stolen and damaged bikes

which leads to

financial losses

 

Secondly, the reading suggests that these programs are effective in cutting car usage.

suggests that

suggests that

are effective in

are effective in

are effective in

cutting car usage

cutting car usage

cutting car usage

 

In contrast, the professor argues that bike-sharing users often come from an already eco-friendly demographic.

In contrast

In contrast,

In contrast,

argues that

argues that

argues that

often come from

often come from

often come from

an already eco-friendly demographic

already eco-friendly demographic

already eco-friendly demographic

 

According to studies mentioned in the listening passage, many participants previously relied on walking or public transit, meaning that the reduction in car usage is less significant than anticipated.

According to studies

mentioned in the listening passage

previously relied on walking or public transit

previously relied on walking or public transit

previously relied on walking or public transit

previously relied on walking or public transit

meaning that

meaning that

the reduction in car usage

the reduction in car usage

the reduction in car usage

is less significant than anticipated

is less significant than anticipated

is less significant than anticipated

is less significant than anticipated

 

Lastly, while the reading claims that bike-sharing is cost-effective due to lower infrastructure needs, the professor points out that the initial setup and ongoing maintenance costs can be substantial.

Lastly,

Lastly,

claims that

claims that

is cost-effective

due to lower infrastructure needs

due to lower infrastructure needs

points out

points out

the initial setup and ongoing maintenance costs can be substantial

can be substantial

can be substantial

 

These unforeseen expenses can place a considerable burden on city budgets, contrary to the reading's assertion of cost-effectiveness.

These unforeseen expenses 

unforeseen expenses

unforeseen expenses

unforeseen expenses

can place a considerable burden

can place a considerable burden

can place a considerable burden

burden on city budgets

burden on city budgets

contrary to the reading's assertion of cost-effectiveness

contrary to

contrary to

the reading's assertion of cost-effectiveness

 

In conclusion, while the reading passage presents bike-sharing programs as beneficial and economical, the listening passage reveals that practical issues such as theft, limited impact on car usage, and high costs can significantly diminish these advantages.

presents programs as beneficial and econmical

presents programs as beneficial and eocnomical

presents programs as beneficial and economical

reveals that

reveals that

reveals that

practical issues such as

limited impact on 

limited impact on

limited impact on

can significantly diminish

can significantly diminish

can significantly diminish