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[TOEFL writing] Jun. 29, 2024

Sungyeon Kim 2024. 6. 29. 11:20

The reading passage outlines several challenges faced by bike-sharing programs, including high maintenance costs, theft, and uneven bike distribution. However, the lecture provides solutions to these issues, arguing that they can be effectively managed.

 

Firstly, while the reading claims that bike maintenance is costly and complex, the professor suggests that efficient logistical strategies, such as partnerships with local bike shop and automated repair kiosks, can minimize these costs. 

 

Secondly, the reading points to theft and vandalism as persistent problems. In contrast, the professor argues that modern tracking technology, like GPS systems and tamper-resistant parts, has greatly improved bike security. Furthermore, community-based monitoring programs have also been effective in some areas. 

 

Finally, the reading mentions the issue of uneven bike distribution. The professor counters this by discussing dynamic rebalancing strategies, such as using data analytics to predict peak usage times and deploying mobile teams for redistribution. Additionally, user incentives for returining bikes to less crowded stations help maintain a balanced distribution.

 

In summary, the professor provides several viable solutions to the challenges outlined in the reading, demonstrating that bike-sharing programs can be managed successfully with the right strategies.

 

outlines several challenges

faced by bike-sharing programs

faced by bike-sharing programs

faced by bike-sharing programs

faced by bike-sharing programs

 

including high maintenance costs

including

including

high maintenance costs

high maintenance costs

high maintenance costs

 theft

theft

theft

uneven bike distribution

 

provides solution to these issues

provides solution to these issues

provides solution to these issues

provides solution to these issues

 

arguing that

aruging that

arguing that

arguing that

arguing that

they can be effectively managed

they can be effectively managed

they can be effectively managed.

 

claims that

is costly and complex

is costly and complex

costly and complex

costly and complex

costly and complex

partnerships

partnerships

minimize thses costs

minimize these costs

minimize these costs

 

points to theft and vandalism

theft and vandalism

vandalism

as persistent problems

as persistent problems

as persistent problems

 

has greatly improved bike security

has greatly improved bike security.

 

have also been effective in some areas

have also been effective in some areas

 

Finally,

Finally,

 

mentions the issue of 

mentions the issue of

mentions the issue of

 

counters this

counters this by discussing dynamic rebalancing strategies

coutners this

 

peak usage time

peak usage time

peak usage times

 

less crowded stations

less crowded stations

less crowded stations

help maintain a balanced distribution.

 

In summary,

In summary,

In summary,

 

provides several viable solutions

provides several viable solutions

provides several viable solutions

provides several viable solutions to the challenges outlined in the reading

demonstrating that 

demonstrating that

can be managed successfully with the right strategies.

can be managed successfully with the right strategies.