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People are more comfortable interacting behind screens, which can lead to a lack of confidence and difficulty in real-life conversations.

People are more comfortable interacting behind screens, which can lead to a lack of confidence and difficulty in real-life conversations.

People are more comfortable interacting behind screens, which can lead to a lack of confidence and difficulty in real-life conversations.

People are more comfortable interacting behind screens, which can lead to a lack of confidence and difficulty in real-life conversations.

People are more comfortable interacting behind screens, which can lead to a lack of confidence and difficulty in real-life conversations.

 

The overreliance on text-based communication also means that nonverbal cues, which are crucial for understanding context and emotions, are often lost.

The overreliance on text-based communication also means that nonverbal cues, which are crucial for understanding context and emotions, are often lost.

The overreliance on text-based communication also means that nonverbal cues, which are crucial for understanding context and emotions, are often lost.

The overreliance on text-based communication also means that nonverbal cues, which are crucial for understanding context and emotions, are often lost.

The overreliance on text-based communication also means that nonverbal cues, which are crucial for understanding context and emotions, are often lost.

 

Model Answer:

I agree with Student 2 that social media has negatively affected face-to-face communication skills.

I agree with Student 2 that social media has negatively affected face-to-face communication skills.

I agree with Student 2 that social media has negatively affected face-to-face communication skills.

 

The ease of online interactions discourages people from engaging in meaningful in-person conversations, leading to a decline in social and emotional intelligence.

The ease of online interactions discourages people from engaging in meaningful in-person conversations, leading to a decline in social and emotional intelligence.

The ease of online interactions discourages people from engaging in meaningful in-person conversations, leading to a decline in social and emotional intelligence.

 

This detachment from direct communication can cause misunderstandings and reduce empathy, as nonverbal cues like body language and tone of voice are absent online.

This detachment from direct communication can cause misunderstandings and reduce empathy, as nonverbal cues like body language and tone of voice are absent online.

This detachment from direct communication can cause misunderstandings and reduce empathy, as nonverbal cues like body language and tone of voice are absent online.

This detachment from direct communication can cause misunderstandings and reduce empathy, as nonverbal cues like body language and tone of voice are absent online.

 

Additionally, the brevity encouraged by social media platforms often leads to superficial exchanges rather than deep, thoughtful discussions.

Additionally, the brevity encouraged by social media platforms often leads to superficial exchanges rather than deep, thoughtful discussions.

Additionally, the brevity encouraged by social media platforms often leads to superficial exchanges rather than deep, thoughtful discussions.

Additionally, the brevity encouraged by social media platforms often leads to superficial exchanges rather than deep, thoughtful discussions.

Additionally, the brevity encouraged by social media platforms often leads to superficial exchanges rather than deep, thoughtful discussions.

 

Consequently, while social media has its advantages in terms of connectivity and information dissemination, it undermines essential interpersonal skills.

Consequently, while social media has its advantages in terms of connectivity and information dissemination, it undermines essential interpersonal skills.

Consequently, while social media has its advantages in terms of connectivity and information dissemination, it undermines essential interpersonal skills.

Consequently, while social media has its advantages in terms of connectivity and information dissemination, it undermines essential interpersonal skills.

 

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