[GRE writing] Jan. 7, 2024

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Task:

In today's society, the emphasis on individual success often overshadows the importance of collaboration and teamwork. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Provide reasons and examples to support your position.

 

Model Answer:

In contemporary society, there is an undeniable emphasis on individual success, often overshadowing the significance of collaboration and teamwork. While individual achievement is certainly valuable, I strongly disagree with the notion that it should overshadow the importance of working collaboratively. Both individual success and teamwork are essential components of a thriving society.

 

Individual success is often celebrated due to its tangible outcomes, such as personal achievements, awards, and innovations. However, it is crucial to recognize that many groundbreaking accomplishments are the result of collaborative efforts. In fields like science, technology, and the arts, teams of individuals with diverse expertise come together to solve complex problems and create impactful solutions. The synergy of collective ideas often leads to innovation and progress that surpasses what any single individual could achieve.

 

Moreover, collaboration and teamwork foster a sense of community and shared responsibility. In workplaces, educational institutions, and community projects, effective teamwork promotes a culture of cooperation, idea exchange, and mutual support. This collaborative spirit not only enhances productivity but also contributes to a positive and inclusive social environment.

 

While individual success is commendable and reflects personal dedication and skill, it should not overshadow the recognition of the collective effort that often underlies significant accomplishments. A society that values and encourages both individual success and teamwork is better positioned for holistic growth and prosperity.

 

Question: In your opinion, what are some examples of situations where individual success and collaboration complement each other? How can society strike a balance between celebrating individual achievements and fostering a collaborative mindset?

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